Well, for the prdouction of this song, it's good. But you have to think about proportion. Don't have too much going at once and don't have to little going, either. I really like this song, I can't wait for the next one. Be wonderful(: Rynne

The verse lyrics seem a little emotionless... They are loud but no anger urgency emoted, I assume anger is the desired emotion based on the rhythm guitar licks... I think the construction is good, the production quality is good... I think the idea of a guitar solo behind the vocals during the chorus is a good idea, but too much, I would suggest a call/response setup for that part... Or just turning the guitar track down and the vocal track up in the mix... I would also tweak the levels on the verse, vocals need turned up, along with the entire low section (bass/kick drum...)

Wow! Pure perfection. I don't even listen to rock songs that much and you made me love it. That's a total winner in my book.

the song is brilliant i cant wait for the next songs...

really nice :] love it

keep at it ..... all is good!!!. beats are sick too!!

pretty good it makes me think very deep lyrics beat is ok, work alil on it, but otherwise....oh nvm it changed fantastic!!!!!!!!!!

I think it has a good beat. Oh my then the beat changed I love it. Very Cool.